英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)1

1、You are an honest and hardworking girl. You leave me a very deep imPssion. No pains, no gains. I hope you will make more progress in English study in the future.

2、You are an excellent boy. I apPciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.

3、You are a handsome boy. I enjoy your activeness on class. Wish you a glorious future.

4、You are an earnest girl and dutiful on your job. Thank you very much for your assistance on my teaching. I hope you can make more progress in your handwriting. Wish you a splendid future.

5、You are an active and passionate girl. I apPciate your participance in class activities. Wish you a happy life.

6、You are a very careful girl. Your handwriting is a marvel of neatness and order. I am sure there is nothing difficult for you to overcome.

7、You are a clever girl. I apPciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.

8、You are a humorous boy. You may have some difficults on English, I hope you will make more progress in later day.

9、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.

10、You are an open-minded boy. I enjoy your activeness on class. Wish you make more improvement on English study.

11、You are a hardworking girl. You have a gift for English study. Where there is a will, there is a way. Wish you a fantastic future.

12、You are a straight-forward boy. I apPciate your creativeness on class. I hope you can make more improvement on your handwriting in later day.

13、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.

14、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.

15、You are an honest boy. You are good at running and jumping. Wish you be a superstar in the near future on Olympics.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)2

1. If Xu juanxiu handwriting, clear and tidy structure, can not help but give people a feeling of fresh and refreshing, this point the teacher really should learn from you. Let us promote each other in the future Chinese learning, ok?

2. The style is the man, and your writing is as simple and open-minded as you are. Your composition skills are very good, which is the crystallization of your long-term training. I hope you can feel and apPciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in your future study.

3. Writing speaks, and I think writing is a reflection of your soul. The road of life is indeed very tortuous, also very long, but as long as you work hard and persistent forward, the crown of success will belong to you.

4. Literature is a delight. Can not write a composition as their own burden, but should be a positive state of mind and delicate brush to record their own heart process.

It can be said that your article is full of genuine feelings. As a human being, failure is inevitable, and having the courage to face it is even more valuable. I believe in gold. There will always be a shining moment. I hope you adjust your attitude as soon as possible, you will find the sky is bluer.

6. You write like a charm. You must have read a lot of literature. Such a rich content, but also shows your literary background. But if the material is adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more wonderful.

7 read your article, as if the eyes flow through a stream, pure, lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and exPss rich connotations in pure language.

8. Composition as a person, from your life experience can be seen that you are a positive and aspirant good young man, you see things have their own unique views, a deep understanding, is really commendable.

This article with specific examples vivid beautiful language novel and unique writing method to exPss the sincere praise to the beautiful mind

10. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It is artistic to set off the mood of the characters through the description of the environment.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)3

1. The composition is based on novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. Between the lines revealed a new breath of life and children's taste.

The article describes the events in the order of development... The language is more fluent, the hierarchy is more clear, and it seems to be happy from beginning to end.

3. The rhythm of the text is bright and the language is fresh. It is always filled with humor and wit.

4. Full text narrative focus not branch not tendran simple language fluent feelings sincere moving.

5. The tone of the whole article is light-hearted and humorous. It is interesting to read.

6. The author has a clever idea and is good at choosing points to unfold the ups and downs of his writing.

7. A number of commendable sentences add some literary spice to the article.

8. Close with an implicit theme

9. It ended a little too abruptly

10. The ending is succinct and touching

11. The ending is also fun

12. The closing echo should start with a complete structure

13 from the scene to the end of the natural

14. The metaphor is appropriate and wonderful ending is the punchline

15. The ending seems to be unfinished, and the beginning should be observed and described vividly

16. The conclusion echoes the topic and points out the central point

17. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and the mood of the characters is set off by the description of the environment, which is very artistic, complicated and not disorderly. It can be detailed and concise, with proper emphasis, and the ending is just the right place, clear and central

18. Start with feeling and end with feeling, which makes the article coherent before and after and at the same time makes the theme of the article repeat again and again and has a strong appeal

19. Describe with great passion... Start short and to the point, focus on the right details and be specific

20. The article's opinion on... To the point of the article... The delicate and vivid portrayal of the lofty concept is admirable

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)4

1. It contains a simple and profound philosophy that is practical and inspiring to read

2. Close-up shots unique and interesting full text full of childlike innocence childlike fun to read more intimate

This article is full of passion. You can feel the young author's enthusiasm for... The full text of the love of the hierarchical clear sentence fluency

4. Case description vivid concrete interesting strong and with the Pvious metaphor... Finally, in a few words, author shows his apPciation for... The emotion of "is moving

5. The article's language is fresh and lively, and the description can capture the main features of things. The short and concise length is worth reading

6. The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of The Times, and doing the atmosphere of The Times.

7 clear veins, a strong sense of hierarchy, gas said orderly, not messy.

8. Be detailed and concise, prioritize and think clearly. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailored to the subject.

9. The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the personalities of the characters are bright and prominent, and the images are plump and vivid.

10. The mood of the characters is set off by the environment, the scene is blended, the situation is now in the scene, the scene is now.

11. Rich imagination, strange ideas and not porced from the real life, connected with the life of the association, broaden the reader's thinking, let a person feel lively and interesting.

The scenery description is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate and appropriate, the scenery is born with emotion, and the scene blends with each other, Psenting to the reader just like a vivid painting of life.

13 fantastic imagination, not only from life, do not lose the real life, but also higher than life, broaden the horizons of readers, full of artistic charm.

14. The description of the process of the event is detailed and detailed. Although there are many contents, it seems orderly and orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and ability of planning and layout.

15. The description of the appearance is vivid, the appearance of the characters is lifelike, and the clothes are suitable, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It is really called "life based on each other".

16. The description of the environment is objective and true. The environment serves the character's character and better explains the ins and outs of the formation of character's character.

17. The exPssion description is vivid and vivid, with a few words, outlining the characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the behavior of the characters has a distinct and unique personality.

18. The content before and after is not closely related, and some content is too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

19. The narrative is sketchy, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinct personalities.

20. Poor planning and lack of clear priorities.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)5

1. The content is mostly line outline, lacking point fine drawing. Inconsistent with the breath of The Times, the content is too old and aging.

2. The focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the idea is clear.

3. Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people at a glance.

4. The subject stands out directly from the content, clear and to the point, without any superfluous meaning.

5. The theme is serious, the idea is noble, and the enterprise is strong.

6. The center is not clear enough and the idea is not clear enough.

7. The theme is vague and obscure, the meaning is vague and vague, and the purpose of writing is unclear.

8. Although there is a central theme, the exPssion is not sufficient and powerful, the words are not real, empty and weak.

9. The subject is not serious enough, and there are dross in the thought.

10. The plot is twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve of the plot and is fascinating.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)6

1. Brief explanation of time, place and result...

2. The language is concise, standard, and the opening sentence is attractive.

3.... In order to... At the beginning, it's more creative. The story of the cause and effect.

4. Start short and succinct; Focus on... Make a deep imPssion.

5. The beginning of the scene is quite new; Flashback the beginning, rendering the mood.

6. Getting straight to the point is also a good way to write.

7. It's a lively start. The use of anthropomorphism makes the beginning lively,

8. Start with a rhetorical question to attract the reader.

9. Get straight to the point and make it clear at a glance.

10. The words are very attractive.

The scene and atmosphere are described to add color to the article.

12.... A brief description of the highlights; provide

13. Give a brief introduction and move on to the next paragraph.

14. Situation description arouses suspense;

15. Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things specific and vivid.

16. Briefly describe the antecedents and pave the way.

17. This section can include dialogue or some psychological description.

18. The... Change to... Would be more appropriate,

19. Naturally linking the Pceding and the following, the details of the description highlight the character quality, moving.

20 narrative clip scenery, to have degrees of people, heart to heart.

21. Anthropomorphic language makes the article more lively.

The appearance description is very interesting and highlights... The introduction into their own ideas, infectious.

23. Use a column of figures, give examples of the method, very vivid.

24. The transition is natural and each paragraph is clearly explained.

25. This part refers to the examples in the text, the language is too flat, can be modified to make the language more vivid.

26. Using metaphors, personification and other figures of speech, vividly write... This part can also be expanded. Show the big from the small

27. The metaphor is well used. Add ancient poetry for association, full of charm.

28.... And... In sharp contrast...

Primary school students can have such an experience, it makes people sit up and take notice.

30. For... "Is a good metaphor.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)7

1. Practical, contains a simple and profound philosophy, reading exciting, emotional.

2. This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's enthusiasm for... Of love. The full text is clear and smooth.

3. The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and the Pvious metaphor... In the same vein. Finally, in a few words, the author shows his apPciation for... Emotional, moving. The article is coherent to form a complete image.

4. The language of the article is fresh and lively, and the description can grasp the main features of things. The length is short and concise, which is worth reading.

5. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is fresh and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.

6. The article is detailed and slightly, orderly and vivid, which is a good work.

7. Close-ups are unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence, read to feel kind. The article can be a fresh and interesting language, describing... Thing to do. Between the lines, full of childhood really tong qu, laughter, can be regarded as a good work.

8. The two main features of this article are to be detailed and concise, and to be born of the virtual and the real. The content is richer and more vivid.

9. The full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple but not vulgar tao, worth borrowing.

10. The language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and makes people smile.

11. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

12. The text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

13. The success of this article lies in paying attention to specific things and developing appropriate imagination.

14. The article is in harmony with the scenery, while painting the scenery while lyric, good at using metaphorical techniques to make the article vivid and specific

15. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, smooth and coherent in nature.

16. Based on real life and appropriate material selection, this article is very innovative, with clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and readability.

17. The full text is fluent in language, relaxed in style, natural and free, which can be regarded as a relatively successful work.

18. The language in this article is not gorgeous, but it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read.

The structure of the article is simple and reasonable, and the author has a deep and thorough understanding of the original text. Full text language sonorous and powerful, resounding, read to make people blood boiling, surging emotions.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)8

1. Feeling too strongly, not feeling, but scratching oneself

2. Lack of depth of emotion, unable to convey feelings with scenes, unable to generate feelings from things. Although feelings are hidden in the text, they are not deeply explored.

3. The psychological depiction is not vivid and specific enough to effectively exPss the characters' thoughts and attitudes, likes and dislikes.

4. The reason repeatedly emphasizes the author's point of view from different angles and aspects. The reason is thorough and clear with distinct ideas.

5. Quoting classic examples of famous quotes is more persuasive and can exPss the author's point of view more effectively.

6. Strong argument, thorough and reasonable analysis, strong philosophy.

7. Rich examples, appropriate material selection, detailed and slightly appropriate description, more convincing.

8. Weak logical reasoning ability and insufficient evidence.

9. Failing to tell the truth about real things, shaping real personality and showing unique inpiduals.

10. Sentences are smooth, sentences are smooth, words are beautiful, narrative images are vivid, and language exPssion ability is strong.

11. The language is concise and to the point, concise and comPhensive to the meaning of the refined and powerful pen power, a few words can convey the spirit of the character.

12. The language is smooth and smooth, the description is meticulous and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is subtle and euphemistic. After reading such as wine fragrance, never in the mouth.

13. The language is lively and humorous, making people laugh.

14. The language is generally fluent, with occasional difficulties.

The language is not clear enough and the sentences are ambiguous and difficult.

16 wordy sentences, words do not exPss meaning, only detailed not slightly, redundant words.

17. The language is too brief, as if written in outline, but fails to outline,

18. Incomplete writing, dry narrative, inflexible, lifeless.

19. Articles that are complex but not messy can be detailed, concise and focused.

20. The article's opinion on... To the point of the article... A delicate and vivid portrayal.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)9

1. The plot develops slowly and lacks certain ups and downs.

2. Plot changes are bland and lack novelty.

3. The plot is straight and Pdictable, like a running account.

4. The process is detailed, but the ending is incomplete. The structure is unreasonable and gives people a sense of anticlimactic ending.

5. The idea is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, can not reflect the real life.

6. The plot twists and turns too fast to be coherent and natural.

7. The metaphor is vivid and appropriate, the body is similar to the figure of god, and the interest and persuasion of the article are greatly enhanced.

8. The proper use of comparison and comparison techniques, through the differences and differences between things, effectively support the center of the article.

9. Lose no time in using parallelism to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only strengthens the language, but also leaves a very deep imPssion on the readers.

10. Skillfully use anthropomorphic techniques to make the objects in the article have the characteristics of human behavior and human thoughts and emotions, so that it can reflect the spiritual process of the protagonist in the article from the side.

11. Material selection is too popular, not rePsentative, old themes and old ideas, bland.

12. Although the events with certain narrative value in life were selected, the underlying truth of the events could not be deeply reflected due to the lack of thorough analysis and in-depth excavation.

13. The selection of material is bland, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, not new, and difficult to profoundly reflect the authenticity of life in times.

14. Failure to reflect the larger truth through small events, and the use of the "small to see big" exPssion technique is not skilled enough.

15. There is a lack of multi-angle characterization of the character image, and only a narrow theme is selected to unilaterally show a certain aspect of the character characteristics.

16. Be able to choose subjects with typical meanings in life and have strong rePsentativeness of events.

17. The selection of novel and unique materials, not mediocre, sweep away the vulgar gas, it is refreshing.

18 although the ordinary things, but thorough and reasonable analysis, rational digging deeper, highlighting the essence of the event.

19. Although the incident is small, it reflects a deeper truth and has a certain universality.

20. Choose material from many aspects and angles, which fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters and enriches the character image.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)10

1. The language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but fails to outline it. The writing is incomplete, and the narrative is dry, dull and lifeless. The beginning of the composition:

2. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and the mood of the characters is set off by the description of the environment, which is very artistic. Start short and to the point

3. The beginning of the article is novel and has the effect of Pempting others. So that the reader can immediately meet the characters... ImPssion.

4. The beginning of the article is fascinating and draws in the reader. ... The combination of point and aspect makes the article vivid, specific and detailed.

5. The article is vivid and readable. The beginning is extraordinary, attracts the reader the beginning moves the heart, has the genuine feeling.

6. The beginning of the article is very clear and plays the role of leading the whole paper. The novel material selection of the article aroused the reader's desire to read on

7. It is written with great passion about... Focus prominent, detailed and slightly appropriate, specific content. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.

8. The language of the article is easy to understand and close to the reality of life, which makes reading feel intimate. ... In a relaxed and happy tone, he spoke to us with an endless aftertaste.

9. The narrative is natural, vivid, compact, cohesive, and centered.

10. For the description of scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is vivid and natural.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)11

1. Clear thinking, correct punctuation, complete structure, Pcise wording,

2. Introduce the customs of Yongfeng Spring Festival in chronological order

3. Can reflect the lively scene of the Spring Festival through specific examples.

Detailed and slightly appropriate, write the festive atmosphere of the Spring Festival

5. Accurate wording and vivid description reflect the excitement and people of the traditional Spring Festival

6. It exPsses the author's infinite happiness

7. Write down your own unique feelings while describing traditional customs. Bad review:

8. It is not detailed and comPhensive, keeping a running account without focusing on key points

9. There are some customs that are not introduced in detail.

10. Not writing about your unique feelings

11. The language is plain and not vivid enough.

12. Disorganized and disorganized thinking.

英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)語(yǔ)12

1. The language of the article is vivid, rich and readable.

2, at the beginning of the extraordinary to attract readers.

At the beginning of moving people with genuine feelings.

4, the beginning of the article is very clear to play the role of total lead full text.

The novel material selection of the article aroused the reader's desire to read on.

The article is based on... The conclusion is brief and eloquent.

7, full text narrative focus not branch not tendran language simple fluent feelings sincere moving.

8. Through the rich language and action of the characters, the ideological quality of the characters is set off. The imagination is reasonable and reasonable, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the coherence is natural and the center is prominent.

Simple language center clear idea reasonable writing level clear.

It is indeed Pcious to write the inner activities of the characters vividly, leaving a deep imPssion on people.

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