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Women aren’t suited for such hard subjects, my friend Seung-woo told me with a smug smile. Seung-woo didn’t think that mathematics was a field for women. Although he was my age and wasn’t tied down by most traditional beliefs, he believed that only men could be true mathematicians. The majority of people in my country, South Korea, believe the gender stereotype that women are inherently inferior to men in mathematics. I strongly disagree with this outdated notion. Women are just as capable of outstanding mathematical achievement as men, and I am determined to help disprove gender stereotypes through my example.

? Mathematics has always given me a deep sense of satisfaction. Even in elementary school, I was attracted to the Pcision and logic inherent in mathematical formulas. I devoured as much mathematical information as I could, collecting theorems of mathematicians such as Gauss and Euclid like other students collected stamps. I had the opportunity to test my skills and knowledge in high school, when I competed in several national math competitions, including the Korea Mathematical Olympiad. My strong showing in these venues, along with my top math grades and perfect math score on the Korean SAT, bolstered my confidence in my abilities. I was proud to prove to others that I was capable of performing at the highest levels. Despite my strong interest and achievement in mathematics, it has been difficult for me to realize my potential due to the Korean educational system, which emphasizes cramming for tests instead of critical understanding. More significantly, Korean social biases against women in the fields of math and science have discouraged me from pursuing my love of mathematics. Thus, I want to study in the United States, where I will be able follow my dream without these constraints. For about a year, I have taken English language courses at a university in Washington, D.C., where I have gained a glimpse of American academic life from the inside. I am very imPssed by American students devotion to their studies and the systems ability to support each students goals. I am therefore especially interested in attending Boston College, which, in addition to offering outstanding math and science courses, is renowned for its emphasis on cultivating students full development, or curapersonalis. At Boston College, I will be able to focus on my goal of becoming an excellent mathematician.

? I am determined to succeed, but I know that I must overcome many challenges. Sometimes, when I feel discouraged by the obstacles I face as a Korean woman in mathematics, I imagine what my life will be like ten years from now. Armed with a Boston College degree, I will visit my old friend Seung-woo. We will have corresponded over the years, so hell already know about the many mathematics articles published in my name, and he will be well aware of the international acclaim they received. I will savor the day when Seung-woo admits that I was correct in believing that I could succeed as a mathematician. I will be proud to know that partly due to my achievements, the door to increased opportunities for women in math and science has swung open a little bit wider.

? 點評?

? 這是一篇韓國女學生申請BC數學專業的PS。文章的主線是?過去――現在――將來。

? 過去?描述自己從小學起就對數學很感興趣?并一直堅持到高中。期間摒除了許多周圍傳統的異見。

? 現在?描述自己好友的反對意見和自己在美國學習一年英語課程的感受。

? 將來?用想象的方式描述自己將來的成功。

? 總的來說，文章寫得比較精彩，作者很好地利用了韓國國內的對于女性學數學的傳統觀念，巧妙地表達了自己要去美國讀書的必要性。在描述自己的將來時?作者又采用了想象的方式、很新穎、可以吸引讀者的眼球。但是在精彩之余，文章的專業性略顯不足。

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Personal Statement

I am the applicant Wang Ming. From September 2002 to July 2006, I studied the specialty of Financial Management at Beijing University of Chemical Technology. Through undergraduate studies, I contacted such disciplines as accounting, international finance, securities investment and so on; however, keenly conscious that my current acquisition is far from enough for me to meet the needs of the fast developing economy, I am eager to pursue further studies. Through various channels, I know about your world-renowned program, and I am now applying for MA Finance and Investment offered by University of Nottingham.

At university, I gained a full understanding of accounting and finance. In specialized studies, I obtained excellent academic records. Paying attention to the balancing development of financial and managerial disciplines, I attended those selective courses including Fiscal Science, Human Resource Management, Monetary Banking, Insurance and the like, knowing about the application of accounting in various aspects. In this way, when I do relevant topics, in face of real voucher, bill and account book, I have experienced the whole process of keeping accounts and working out financial statement and deepened my understanding of the importance of accounting in enterprises.

In the process of studies, I Pferred such teaching mode as case class, group discussion, PPT rePsentation and the like, and I always took active part in them, acting as group leader and leading the members to select topic, collect materials and make topic report. We once analyzed the successful development of Nokia in China, the mobile telephone magnate. While Motorola and Samsung had laid a solid foundation in China, how did Nokia establish fine financial system to support its development? Based on the uniform framework of global financial management, Nokia took Chinese characteristics into full consideration in the aspects of account procedures and coordination of headquarters and branches, and only in three years, its headquarters gained the right and opportunity to control its branches, promoting the smooth connection of local places and the globe and seeking expansion. Through such case analysis, I obtained further understanding of the vital position of financial analysis and accounting systems in enterprises. The choice of investment and the opportunities to operate fund can always change inutility into wonder.

In Baring Bank bankruptcy discussion in class, I developed an unquenchable interest in financial derivatives. The power of double-edged sword became extremely mighty in market full of competitions. Through this case, I realized the great importance of balance sheet and its check, and if there were strict auditing system and clear pision of rights and responsibilities, the result may probably be totally different. In this sense, the function of accounting could not be ignored. After knowing about accounting and financial knowledge, I stressed more on the absorption of knowledge in various aspects, starting to dabble in a variety of aspects, studying the English original books of accounting and comparing the differences of accounting standards in a wealth of countries. When foreign enterprises enter China, how shall we interPt the financial reports of them so as to compare the accounting modes and make the correct decision? After analyzing Daimler-Benz AG, I found out that on account of the differences of accounting statement, a loss-making enterprise could rePsent profit in another accounting mode, and I was again startled by the function and position of accounting in economy. My eagerness to make certain achievements in the field increased day by day.

Despite of academic studies, I was also keen on participation in association activities, joining in Debate Association, English Club and other associations of the university and winning the Third Place in Debate Competition of the college. I am also fond of drawing and calligraphy, devoting a majority of spare time to them. My drawing works won awards in competitions of the university many times.

Along with deepening my academic studies, I find that the function of accounting far exceeds commercial field. How to carry out inpidual financing so as to maximize your assets? How to judge the profit-making condition and financial risks of a company from its financial statement in securities market so as to optimize your investment? How the feasibility of an item is reflected in accounting language? Can it bring you prospective profit as you expect? With strong desire for knowledge and curiosity, I firm my determination to study a postgraduate program. Yours, boasting academic strength in accounting and financial fields, rich teaching resources and excellent curriculum setting, is my ideal destination to pursue further studies, and the practicability of courses and authenticity of cases will enable me to apply my future acquisition to work. In this manner, I will lay a solid academic foundation and cultivate strong practical capability for future engagement in economic field in China. With all sincerity, I hope you can take my application into serious consideration, and I shall apPciate you if you grant me an opportunity for further studies.